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Prologue
RAIN POURED HARD DRENCHING EVERYTHING IN THE CITY GRAVE YARD.
Sky was filled with gray clouds that had a hint of orange showing through as morning approached. I stood near a grave stone staring in shock at the name I saw. I felt hollow and sick like my body was falling apart on me I keep a handle on myself and just looked away trying to keep my breathing under control.
As I tuned to run away I noticed a figure of a man standing in front of me, his skin white as the moon light it reminded me of the pale skin of a vampire, his eyes flickered from a liquid gold to a bright silver green, with hair as dark as a winters eve.
I nervously turned to run away from the some how creepy but beautiful guy. As I just past the grave stone another figure appeared in front of me in a fast supernatural way, he stood an equal distance from me as the guy behind me had. I noticed his shinny gray coat that engulfed his muscular body. Flaming red eyes seemed to pierce my soul as I stared at him with a sudden over whelming wave of fear that froze me in my place guarantying that I wouldn’t try to escape his grasp if he had the chance to take me.
I heard the werewolf make a low deep rumble that came from his diaphragm; it had to be some sort of warning to the guy behind me, maybe something along the lines of leave? I wasn’t sure. Behind me I heard the guy hiss in response, it wasn’t a normal human response. The sound was like a snake but more threatening in ways I thought weren’t possible to scare someone but it did and I cowered against the grave stone for some protection of some sort.
“Kari you don’t need to be afraid.” The guy behind spoke my name as if he new me. When I looked back at him his face was soft and comforting. Did he know me?
Another deep threatening growl came from the werewolf in front of me as he began to circle me, I looked back at the guy behind me and so was he, his face no longer soft just firm, stern. As they circled around me it seemed like time counted slower and slower every second and rotation they made. On the third circle rotation they suddenly launched themselves at me bearing their teeth at each other. I screamed, fear carving at my heart as I pressed myself against the grave stone trying to become it, I could feel my eyes widen in petrified terror.
RAIN POURED HARD DRENCHING EVERYTHING IN THE CITY GRAVE YARD.
Sky was filled with gray clouds that had a hint of orange showing through as morning approached. I stood near a grave stone staring in shock at the name I saw. I felt hollow and sick like my body was falling apart on me I keep a handle on myself and just looked away trying to keep my breathing under control.
As I tuned to run away I noticed a figure of a man standing in front of me, his skin white as the moon light it reminded me of the pale skin of a vampire, his eyes flickered from a liquid gold to a bright silver green, with hair as dark as a winters eve.
I nervously turned to run away from the some how creepy but beautiful guy. As I just past the grave stone another figure appeared in front of me in a fast supernatural way, he stood an equal distance from me as the guy behind me had. I noticed his shinny gray coat that engulfed his muscular body. Flaming red eyes seemed to pierce my soul as I stared at him with a sudden over whelming wave of fear that froze me in my place guarantying that I wouldn’t try to escape his grasp if he had the chance to take me.
I heard the werewolf make a low deep rumble that came from his diaphragm; it had to be some sort of warning to the guy behind me, maybe something along the lines of leave? I wasn’t sure. Behind me I heard the guy hiss in response, it wasn’t a normal human response. The sound was like a snake but more threatening in ways I thought weren’t possible to scare someone but it did and I cowered against the grave stone for some protection of some sort.
“Kari you don’t need to be afraid.” The guy behind spoke my name as if he new me. When I looked back at him his face was soft and comforting. Did he know me?
Another deep threatening growl came from the werewolf in front of me as he began to circle me, I looked back at the guy behind me and so was he, his face no longer soft just firm, stern. As they circled around me it seemed like time counted slower and slower every second and rotation they made. On the third circle rotation they suddenly launched themselves at me bearing their teeth at each other. I screamed, fear carving at my heart as I pressed myself against the grave stone trying to become it, I could feel my eyes widen in petrified terror.
this is a sample of my book.^^ i hope you guys like it, I think it needs more work but you know an author always finds faults in something. so yeah complement, criticize or what not I'd love the opinions.^^
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It's very nice lol, you should invest in some English books so you can build vocabulary and what not, the grammar is not that bad in my opinion but I'm sure you can arrange things to fit better. If you'd like some tips we can talk about it more on messenger. 